Will I ever tire of re-working my thesis statement? I already am, but I’m going to continue.
This is what I outlined in my honours presentation:
- Examine the tensions arising from the publication of personal blogs by employees
- Employing a Foucauldian analysis
- Of contestation located around two prominent personal bloggers
I want to work it into a more concise question.
What would a Foucauldian analysis of the contestation found on and around dooce and QueenofSky reveal about the tensions arising from the publication of personal blogs by employees?
It seems clunky. How about:
What do Foucault’s theories say about the contestation found on and around dooce and QueenofSky?
I dropped the last part because that’s really something that may come out of the analysis rather than what I’m doing.
What do Michel Foucault’s theories indicate about the employment tensions found on and around dooce and QueenofSky?
This last one is more concise. I like.
Best I run off and get some feedback from super coach M.